I am going to give you the text of a marketing email, you will return an improved version.

Input:
{
  "original": "Hi NAME, We would like to invite you to Demo Hub Summit. Every year we host great experts on new technologies. Our goal is to connect people focused on their business growth. This year it’s about smart automation. The full Agenda is available here. Receive a complimentary VIP pass by using the code DEMO_VIP. Register by Monday, September 14 to book a place for our creative startup workshops lead by John Wallence!"
}

Output:
{
  "new_version": "Hello [Your Name], We're thrilled to extend an invitation to you for the upcoming Demo Hub Summit. This annual event brings together leading experts in new technologies, providing a platform for individuals like you who are committed to business growth. This year, we're focusing on the exciting field of smart automation. You can find the complete agenda at this link. As a token of our appreciation, we're offering you a complimentary VIP pass. Simply use the code DEMO_VIP during registration. Don't miss out on our creative startup workshops, led by the renowned John Wallence. Secure your spot by registering before Monday, September 14!"
}